Saturday, January 16, 2010

in progress

We learned a new technique in my digital illustration class and I think it is going to take a little practice. I'm not particularly happy with the direction this one is going, but I'm not to the point of giving up. I just can't seem to put my finger on what the problem is. You?


  1. Seems like maybe you're losing contrast--like maybe the detail is overwhelming the focus. Can't really describe it--like it's a bit muddy? It doesn't have a strong focal point or compositional motion. There's less purposeful repetition than in most of your work and less depth. It's still good, sweetie--loads better than I could ever do :) But, those are some things I notice.

  2. PS--mama can't comment because of your verification settings. just fyi