tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4675997744227996898.post1480791211098379434..comments2023-06-06T02:35:17.277-07:00Comments on Emily Davis: in progressEmily Davishttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00424228180425000934noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4675997744227996898.post-9293109670016198252010-01-17T19:29:03.982-08:002010-01-17T19:29:03.982-08:00PS--mama can't comment because of your verific...PS--mama can't comment because of your verification settings. just fyiSaraJoyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15538223296337992738noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4675997744227996898.post-10412922860878897982010-01-17T19:28:25.715-08:002010-01-17T19:28:25.715-08:00Seems like maybe you're losing contrast--like ...Seems like maybe you're losing contrast--like maybe the detail is overwhelming the focus. Can't really describe it--like it's a bit muddy? It doesn't have a strong focal point or compositional motion. There's less purposeful repetition than in most of your work and less depth. It's still good, sweetie--loads better than I could ever do :) But, those are some things I notice.SaraJoyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15538223296337992738noreply@blogger.com