Monday, July 12, 2010

12 July 2010


I'm struggling with the design with this one. I want to keep it consistent with the others, but I don't know what it needs. Any suggestions?

3 comments:

  1. Hey Emily, I don't think I've ever posted on here before. Maybe I have? Anyways, I wander over here frequently to see what you're up to (FYI). I love these fruit things. I don't really know what they are for but they're fun!

    When i'm comparing this one to the rest it seems like the others all have some sort of "highlight" on them and these don't. There is a small hint of a highlight on the blueberries but it's like a half-step lighter at most. I would push the highlights more. Also, I notice you've hinted at a little bit of purple here and there. I think that could also be pushed. I also wonder, do blueberries grow in bunches like grapes? It seems as though they were plucked off of the vine and then set on a flat surface. Maybe indicate some vines or something? Just a thought. And lastly I think your left two leaves are to similar. Shape-wise all three are similar but at least the far right one is smaller. Good stuff!

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  2. I had just one more thing to say. All the rest seem to fill the format better. And the blueberries have at least 2/3 open space above them.

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  3. all you need to do is put poppin' fresh in the background. That would solve all of your problems. Anyway, I really just wanted to say that your new header is awesome. I like it a lot.

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