really nice design I could see this at target. Her expression is a little odd. Maybe the eyes are a little too wide open
I think this turned out really nice. Dustin had a good point about the expression - maybe a warmer smile and squint the eyes a bit. But overall, nice.
I'm so glad illustrator isn't so scary anymore... :) She doesn't have as much personality as most of your characters. Her body and clothes are great...but she's missing something in her expression.